Final cut

Comment

Our rough cut was incomplete due to the areas of the building which we were going to film in had been crowded. I thought, for a first draft, it was quite good because of the use of the camerawork and editing. This gave a sense of anticipation and wondering what will happen. However, one of the pieces of camerawork had to be changed, as the suspense was not high enough. This is due to the corridor was shown to be clear, before she looked around the corner to check if it is safe. The sound also heightened this, but not to the standard of which we wanted. Some improvements will be made. The film was originally a bit short, so we will add in the scenes which we wanted to add, but couldn't due to reasons mentioned previously. Also, the scene in which we wanted to change the camera position will be dealt with and we will also include some incidental music for Jabba, to give a sense of the character he is.

Rough Cut

the corridor animatic

Script

Scene 1 - Set - Atrium -Ext-Day

As this scene is the opening scene of the sequence it give little introduction but to have a quiet and sudden start.

Establishing shot of the Atrium

(Susan Bullet will enter the Atrium)

Mid Shot Of Susan

Susan Shows feeling of worry and dismay of the surroundings

Scene 2 - Set: Atrium - Ext - Day

This scene will be used to introduce the victim facial feature and star the feeling of the film.

Tracking shot of woman

(Woman is running down corridors)

Some closes up of facial expression of shock and fear

(Woman will keep looking back to find nothing)

eye line match

Scene 3- Set: College - Ext - Day

This scene will be used to start the tension and bring the horror a life and introduction to the minster of the film.

(Woman goes to hide in a doorway.)

There will be an eye line match of her looking down the corridor

(this is a dark figure emerges. The man is wearing a long dark coat and a hat (a long shot will be used)).

(He stops for a moment and starts walking towards her, down the corridor).

(Camera will go back to a close up of the woman sobbing, looking up (as if to say “why me”)).

(She will look again and the man will be gone)

Scene 4 - Corridor College - Ext - Day

This scene will be the big chase sequence which all backing sound and camera movement will echo this sentiment.

(She will breathe a sign of relief. Then a gloved hand with be put over her mouth)

(her eyes will widen.)

Scene 5 - Studio College - Ext - Day

(Another woman will wake up from a dream looking panicked.)

(She will look around her bedroom to find nothing.)

(Then she will lye back on her bed in a daze)

a medium shot will be used for this entire scene

Scene 6 - Studio College - Ext - Day

This scene is the climax of the opening scene this will have eerie soundtrack and incidental music.

(Susan Will enter Kitchen alone)

Medium shot of the door entering

(Susan will grasp a hot cup of Coffee)

(A Creaking Door)

(Susan Will Drop Cup)

Shooting schedule

08 DATE	SCENE NO	D/N	INT/EXT	LOCATION NAME/ ONE LINE DESCRIPTION	CAST
23/2/2010	1	D	Internal	College - it is readily available	Lucy Morgan – Susan
23/2/2010-25/2/2010	2	D	Internal	College - First Floor To be used as balcony	Adam Spence - Jabber Lucy Morgan – Susan
26/2/2010-27/2/2010	3	D	Internal	Corridor College – This will be used for the chase	Lucy Morgan – Susan Adam Spence – Jabba
2/3/2010-4/3/2010	4	D	Internal	Studio – This is the wake up scene / end of dream sequence.	Lucy Morgan – Susan
4/3/2010-6/3/2010	5	D	Internal	Studio- Kitchen scene and the dropping of the cup scene	Lucy Morgan – Susan Adam Spence - Jabba

Actor list, location list and costume and prop list

Actor List;

Lucy Morgan

Location List ;

Corridor (in college)

Studio (in college)

Atrium

Costumes And Props List;

Knife

Cup or Mug

Trench Coat and Trilby (Villain)