Final cut

Comment

Our rough cut was incomplete due to the areas of the building which we were going to film in had been crowded. I thought, for a first draft, it was quite good because of the use of the camerawork and editing. This gave a sense of anticipation and wondering what will happen. However, one of the pieces of camerawork had to be changed, as the suspense was not high enough. This is due to the corridor was shown to be clear, before she looked around the corner to check if it is safe. The sound also heightened this, but not to the standard of which we wanted. Some improvements will be made. The film was originally a bit short, so we will add in the scenes which we wanted to add, but couldn't due to reasons mentioned previously. Also, the scene in which we wanted to change the camera position will be dealt with and we will also include some incidental music for Jabba, to give a sense of the character he is.

Rough Cut

the corridor animatic